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You are my Moonlight: A Sonnet

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    Sooo I have to do a sonnet for English Class and I wanted your opinion on how I did...
    Here goes nothing...

    You are my Moonlight
    
    Everyday I await your arrival
   The sun has set now, clocks are ticking fast
   For when you show you are my revival
   I look over the lands that seem so vast

   The days have worn thin as land has turned to white
   But I will still wait for you to arrive
   For thou has been my lover since forever
   When I am with you I feel so alive

   We riot against the feelings of fear
   For safety overrules when together
   Starbound we are as the moon awakens
   Here is the moon high in all its glory

   I bask in your loving moonlight tonight
   Now forever becomes eternity.

 
I dunno...I like it but i don't know if it's good enough..
Lemme know your opinion.


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